Me llamo Lauren.
Soy de Franklin, Wisconsin.
Vivo en Pewaukee, Wisconsin.
Soy Americana.
Hablo Ingles.
Tengo 13 años. Mi cumpleaños es el 22
de Marzo de 1999.
Soy baja.
Soy bonita, inteligente, y rubia.
No soy antipática y morena.
Me gusta hámsteres y helado.
No me gustan las uvas o el color rojo.
Lauren,
ReplyDeleteGreat job on your first blog post!
Great job with spelling and use of accent marks! Double check your spelling of ingles.
Be careful not to capitalize months, languages, or your nationality in Spanish although we do in English.
Good job ending many of your adjectives with -a. Be sure to check that all adjectives describing you are in the feminine form because you are a girl.
Remember with "me gusta" you have to say "el color rojo" and "las uvas" because you are talking about these things in general. This applies to "me gusta" in all cases, which you did with the color red. Good job! Remember, when the thing you like is plural like "las uvas" you have to change "me gusta" to "me gustan."
Make these corrections and your blog post will really improve.
Okay :)
ReplyDeleteExcept I DON'T like the color red or grapes. So... do I still need to fix that? I did fix the one mistake with the -a